After pitching my Storyboard Project Plan 2 .0 , I received suggestions and advise from my teacher, Mr. Nick. First, he suggested that I should add some reaction shots in between shot 11 and 12. Second, he said that the phone in shot 23A can be misleading because it could make audiences to think that it is a mobile game. Lastly, he advised to make the advert a little shorter in time. Here is a revised, third version of the plan for my Pokemon Legends: Arceus advertisement: Product: Pokemon Legends: Arceus (video game) Target Market: People ages 25-40 Setting: CEO's office/workplace, House Outfit: Formal Clothing/Suit/Work clothes, gradually gets messier throughout the advert. Storyline: (Pokemon names are written in Italics) - main character: mid 30s man is a CEO of a company - shot of name plaque on desk (CEO), man working on the background out of focus in his office signing papers getting work calls non-stop (DGS: phone ringing, flipping papers) - man's bag rustles, m