Storyboard Plan 2.0

After pitching my Storyboard Plan 1.0, I received suggestions and advise from my teacher, Mr. Nick. He said that there was too much going on and that I had to make some scenes more simple. He also suggested to add a slogan instead of just stating "Available now" at the end of the advert. I changed and revised the storyline of my advertisement and added a slogan at the end of the advert.

Here is a revised, second version of the plan for my Pokemon Legends: Arceus advertisement:

Product: Pokemon Legends: Arceus (video game)

Target Market: People ages 25-40

Setting: CEO's office/workplace, House

Outfit: Formal Clothing/Suit/Work clothes

Storyline:

(Pokemon names are written in Italics)

- main character: mid 30s man is a CEO of a company

- shot of name plaque on desk (CEO), man working on the background out of focus in his office signing papers getting work calls non-stop (DGS: phone ringing, flipping papers)

- man's bag rustles, makes "pika-pika" sound

- man turns head to investigate

- man picks up bag, opens bag

- Pikachu appears from inside the bag

- Pikachu jumps out the bag and runs outside the office

- man "hey! wait up!"

- man chases after pikachu outside the building, looks around confused

- wydeer makes a sound and man turns head to investigate, sees wyrdeer

- man rides wyrdeer which lead him to his house

- man opens door revealing the 3 starter pokemons

- man's phone makes "beep-beep" sound, man takes out phone from pocket

- phone shows "welcome to hisui"

- man picks up rowlet and chooses it as his starter pokemon

- shot of pikachu on the counter with apples and a physical copy of Pokemon Legends: Arceus next to it, man playing on the TV on the background out of focus, "Available now" "Explore history, make history"